Thank You to Larry Johnson who gave me a 5 Sar Rating and a very nice review. He also included some editing tips, which I appreciate. Copy and pasted here: Larry Johnson A very good first novel August 27, 2021 Format : Paperback This book has excellent characters and an interesting plot. If it seems not to have much point early, stick with it. You'll be rewarded. Biesty is a master at creating a sense of simultaneous working-class struggle and aimlessness, and his main character, Dan Carolan, is a polished and practiced cynic with good reason to be. His roommates are a circus of users who take petty advantage of one another and are mostly jerks. This is an excellent first novel. I found it interesting that Biesty is retired from the New York City Fire Department. A note to the editors: Hemingway either has one M or two. Can't be both. And "dieing" doesn't mean to change the color of something. Excellent book, though, and a lively read.
Welcome to my new Blog. I am David Biesty a newly published author. My book is a novel: The Outcast Missing Someone . It is available on Amazon as an eBook and paperback. I appreciate everyone who took a chance on a new author and tried my book. I hope it is up to your standards. It took a long time to get to this point. I started writing this about 14 years ago. A lot of life happened in between, but the book was finished how I imagined it from the start. I wrote it from start to finish with few notes, never jumping ahead. I have had so much support from so many people that they could not be listed here. Thanks to everyone who helped me get to this accomplishment!
August 3, I received first review of my new novel, The Problem at the Orphanage, from Andrew. Four stars, reposted here: I read David Biesty's first novel, The Outcast Missing Someone, and thought the author's strong points were his description of time and place (in that case 1990's Lower East Side) and his character development. In this, his second book, Biesty again succeeds in both respects. The "orphanage" is this walled-in world where nothing is really as it seems. The main character, Artie, is presented as an almost tragically plain everyman and must confront this dystopian institution while conducting a school review for the state. Biesty switches POV between a handful of interesting characters and I found myself eagerly anticipating getting back into each character's mind whenever the story turned back to their POV. From the more straight forward approach of his first novel, Biesty switches gear here and constructs a Stephen King type plot line full ...
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